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against my chest you make a soft semi-colon as my hips
     press into yours and you yield like damp paper

and against my chest the pulse of us
     a filament-hum in a sixty-watt bulb

and my chin against your neck, an impromptu bookstop

and your cheek runs against
     my stubble and it is an embossed leather cover

and our noses meet

beads of sweat on my brow roll against yours and we are
     a printing press

until our dilated eyes meet like magnifying glasses
     and our lips touch like the curves of an m

and the follicles on our arms raise into braille
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i'm not sure really what to say about this one..was really in a weird mood

\m/ thanks for the DD y'all
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je ne sais quoi by =Chillinvillain made me into a printing press. ( Featured by !GwenavhyeurAnastasia )

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Incredible.
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=Chillinvillain Jan 16, 2011  Student Writer
:hug:
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This gives me chills!! Great work :-)
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=Chillinvillain Jan 6, 2011  Student Writer
thanks!
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and your cheek runs against
my stubble and it is an embossed leather cover

And the braille are brillant.

Congrats on the DD, Kev! Awesome!
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=Chillinvillain Dec 22, 2010  Student Writer
<3, i r misses u
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~Xedramon Dec 19, 2010   General Artist
well i was thinking about this again and came to read it again today, but...

did you change something? for some reason I dont remember the embossed leather cover. I thought i was something about a thousand quils...
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=Chillinvillain Dec 19, 2010  Student Writer
yup, this is still in editing phase.
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~Xedramon Dec 19, 2010   General Artist
ah okay, just making sure i wasnt going crazy :P

though personally i liked how it was before, i still think this is a really beautiful poem :)
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=Chillinvillain Dec 21, 2010  Student Writer
thats the whole thing about editing that tends to piss me off, over the years I've learned that I know I cannot make everyone happy, but it's still obnoxious when I turn people off from a poem while editing.
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